The owner of our company is Ana Mae. She has extensive restaurant, catering and event planning experience. She has the knowledge and the business contacts to pull off a high class event. Her innovative ideas for team building events will help your team grow and your business will benefit from having a strong team. Call us today for more information on how to make your next event a success.
Hi Ana,
ReplyDeleteYour background is very nice, but maybe do a scrolling background so it doesn't look like tile work. With scrolling background it'll move with the reader instead of stop, and restart the image. I think you should say "I", instead of referring to yourself in the third person. I think it would make the blog feel more personal and you'll make a connection with the whomever is reading it. I think you should have also put examples of weddings you've planned in the past to put a vision in their mind. Punctuation and your blog title are perfect. The colors are very pleasing and calming to look at. It was a great idea to put a picture of yourself into your "about me" posting, so people will know who they're working with.
Katie's feedback is FANTASTIC. I agree with EVERYTHING she wrote.
ReplyDeleteYour second paragraph should be in your About Ana Mae box under your connection links.
In its place, I would like to read more details about the events. Think about your target. Appeal to them in their pretentious executive-ness. Explain how you cater to them and do a little name dropping. Details, examples, and an heir of exclusivity.